A short poem of betrayal. How do you like it.?

Wow what a great poem as you tell of how some dead beat left you for dead as they watched as you died a little more each day.' and just stood and watched,In this life some people are so harsh;' I had someone i loved so much hurt me too' for nothing while my son was lieing in the hospital /why do people do this .Why did he do this to me ' the one that loved him' and would give her life for him' which she almost did last nite I was released at 4 am this morning' and i;m still shakeing my head why' why did he betray me ?????Go figure ' thats why life sucks.